Updated Script | Minor

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After showing some people who were unfamiliar with the project the script, they all expressed that there were a few gaps in the narrative, therefore I have updated the script as below.

One note to make is that I have some interactions with the crew in brackets. This is because as of yet I have not decided whether I want additional characters in the crew of the film or not. This will largely depend on how long the rigging and animation process will take for each character. This should become apparent in the upcoming tests.

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