I have to say I'm both a little disappointed in myself and feeling better than I did in the last project. Weird huh? Basically, for this first stage I have focused a lot on research, and fully developing my concept before properly diving into drawing it. This has given me a much clearer path than I found myself on in the Invisible Cities project, but has meant that I have ultimately produced fewer thumbnails than I would have liked. I felt like this additional research was necessary to ensure that I wasn't chasing my own tail for a number of days which is how Invisible cities felt at times. So, at this point, although I have less thumbnails right now (more will be uploaded tomorrow), I feel like I am in a much stronger position that I was after the OGR before. OGR1 by Eleanor 'Nelly' Luckett on Scribd More thumbnails tomorrow! Watch this space!!!
Hi Nelly - okay - this still feels a bit woolly to me - especially in terms of Chapter 2 and 3; in 3 there seems to be a lot of possible case-studies still floating around when by that point you really want to be nailing your colours to the mast and using fewer things about which to say/prove/discuss 'everything'. Likewise Chapter 2 - you'd expect to find your specific names/practioners/theorists of disability in here - so right now, it's hard for me to see if you've identified any of these key 'voices' yet. Chapter 1 looks like it starts things generally - so being super clear about what you are and what you're 'not' including in your definition of disability.
ReplyDeleteSo - in order for this to be helpful in helping you put together a decent OGR for Andrew, you need to move away from generalities and 'multiple case-studies' and be much more specified.
I got very very confused about this from the presentation and recording, so I think I'll try and write it up as the OGR and post it early if that's ok?
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