Pugwash Updated Script (V2) | Minor

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This is the latest version of my script for my final year film. I'm not completely happy with this yet, as I don't feel that it flows too well when written, however I have a suspicion that this is partially due to the way that non-speech scripts look. I am currently working on the animation and hope to have the latest version uploaded by the middle of next week. I am hoping that this will translate better into visual language than it does into written English.

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